Poem format:
Line 1: | 8 syllables |
Line 2: | 8 syllables |
Line 3: | 8 syllables |
Line 4: | 8 syllables with repetition |
OURS IS ...
Tulips waving, Chica-dee's sing
weather warming, Robin takes wing
lazily swaying on our swing
first signs of Spring, first signs of Spring
Crocus open to catch the sun
Hummingbirds return has begun
Freesia scent is second to none
time for some fun, time for some fun
Children's laughter filling the air
gingerly playing without a care
squealing and screeching everywhere
we sit and stare, we sit and stare
Spring is here, we see it first hand
longing to feel our toes in sand
trips to the beach are in demand
life is so grand, life is so grand
YOUR TURN
ENJOY
JL&B
Wow I love this one. I love this type of poem too. I might give it a try, let me think on it awhile..lol
ReplyDeleteThanks for finding it here... I had a heck of a time getting it to post, even thought I lost it URGH!!!
ReplyDeleteYep I really like trying new styles, I think you will do well with this one !
ENJOY
JL&B
Really nice job with this one! I like it a lot. :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun poem! Thanks for teaching me a new poetry form. :)
ReplyDeleteLove this one! Thanks for explaining its form, might give it a go sometime too.
ReplyDeleteAlso scanning through your blog after your visit to my place. Love your photos... the terracing looks fabulous. Had a yard with a similar hill - that was our plan but we moved before getting it in. Yours is turning out well.
I love this poem. I sure describes spring in a lovely manner. I'm glad you introduced us to this type poem. I like it very much.
ReplyDeletea lovely stroll through spring thank you...and now snow is falling again, oh my!
ReplyDeleteHey there! I decided to give your challenge a try. I'm not sure that I did it right, but you can read it on my Dancing With Daisy blog if you're interested. It was fun to give it a try. :)
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